Okay, so I've been writing this story and posting it on WattPad. It's like deviantart but it's exclusively for writers.
I love this website but my only reviewer is my sister. She's very good and quite helpful, I have no complaints about her being my reviewer except for one little thing.
I need more than one.
I desperately want to improve my writing, my mechanics, I want people to show me what needs fixing so I can improve with it. Please.
http://www.wattpad.com/10613983-undecim-imperiis-1-1#.UdCnT2KThkk
You should be able to read it without an account.
Leave me a review here or if you're so inclined or you have an account, leave one on Watt